開頭武器（不用扣分，多用也會扣分）

• I believe that [while social media has brought significant benefits to society], negative impacts outweigh the positives. (I believe that 很常見的開頭了，保底拿3-4/5分，如果有更好的就不用了)

• Firstly, I agree that the [health consequences of excessive consumption of sugary drinks and junk food are significant and costly, both for individuals and society as a whole.] (I agree that 常用在觀點混亂的題目，先點題自己支持哪一方，不過壞處就是到了 “On the other hand” 這種總結轉折，會將整個文章變得非常突兀)

• I strongly advocate for the [imposition of taxes on unhealthy products.]

文章分斷間隔武器（不用扣分，多用也會扣分）

• Firstly,

• However,

• Additionally,

• Furthermore,

• In conclusion,

• In conclusion, despite its [challenges]

好的句子結構(見一個抄一個)

Opening topic sentence

• Firstly, [fiction] plays a crucial role [in developing students' imagination and critical thinking skills.] (這裡說明小說很重要，扮演很重要的角色)

• Furthermore, fiction can serve as a gateway to engaging with more challenging non-fiction texts. (這裡說明小說可以是一個通往閱讀更高層次非小說文章的大門: a gateway to engaging with more challenging non-fiction texts)

• Moreover, fictional works can convey important lessons and perspectives on [historical events, social issues, and human nature in ways that are engaging and memorable.] (更加吸引人和更有記憶點，可以用 engaging and memorable)

• [Education] should embrace a balanced approach that includes both [fiction and non-fiction texts,] rather than [limiting students' exposure to fictional works.] (embrace a balanced 這裡也可以發展成自己的觀點，我認為政府應該擁抱一個xx的方法，In my perspective, government should embrace a XX approach that include …)

• While [Andrew] correctly points out the importance of understanding [economic and political data in our global society], it's worth noting that the skills gained from studying fiction – such as critical analysis and interpretation – [are equally applicable to evaluating non-fiction texts.] (這裡發現可以直接抄文章參考內容，先點題，再進行補充，補充時可以加幾個相關例子和自己的觀點)

• Games strengthen problem solving skills. (這裡直接點題”遊戲”的好處，後面可以直接接一段比較長的例子)

Summarize

• we can maximize the benefits while minimizing the negative impacts of [social media.] (多方優點和缺點總結)

Changes

• [Social media] has undoubtedly revolutionized [communication] (無疑徹底改變了)

• The abundance of [anonymous accounts] (可以用於替代many)

• excessive use of [social media has been……] (過度使用，也可以替代many)

• , which can lead to the [spread of false or harmful content.] (＂導致＂的用法)

• [but you could] enhance it further by [varying your sentence…] (進一步加強)

Modern Words(現代社會觀念詞：民主、自由、權力、文明……)

• This democratization of [information sharing is a significant advantage of social media.] (民主化)

Emotion(與感情相關的詞)

• [can lead to] feelings of inadequacy or FOMO (fear of missing out). (不足感)

• [Deleting his steam account sounds kind of] like knee-jerk xenophobia (下意識的仇外心理)

fiction and classic book name (小說，可能用到)

• For instance, novels like "To Kill a Mockingbird" or "1984" offer profound insights into societal problems and ethical dilemmas, encouraging students to think deeply about complex issues.